Monday, November 9, 2015

Sea turtle writing doc - Jazzy and Amber


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Cohort of dinosaurs
150 million years
Overcome the odds to survive Reptiles
10% survive to adults
1% survive with human intervention
Over 150 million years ago, along with the dinosaurs, lived a species of sea turtles.  They have managed to survive longer than many other animals from that period.  However, only 10% of sea turtles to breeding age.  Now that humans have come along, only 1% of all sea turtles survive to breed the new generation of baby sea turtles.
Over 150 million years ago, along with the dinosaurs, there lived a species of sea turtles.  They have managed to survive longer than many other animals from the Jurassic period.  However, only 10% of sea turtles live to breeding age.  Now that humans have come along, only 1% of all sea turtles survive to breed the new generation of baby sea turtles.





Eggs
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  • Eggs of an sea turtle is a size of a small ping pong ball.
  • the mother goes to the top of the beach and lays the eggs
  • the mother lay 1000 eggs a year
  • the mother lays 50 - 200 eggs in one spot

An adult sea turtles climbs up a beach to lay 1000 eggs.  First she digs a hole, so that she can lay the eggs in it. Then the eggs hatch and try to make it to the water but sadly only 400 make it to the water.
An adult sea turtles climbs up a beach to lay 1000 leathery ping pong ball sized eggs.  First she digs a hole, so that she can lay the eggs in it. the female lays 1000 eggs a year but only 50 - 200 in one spot. Then the eggs hatch and try to make it to the water but sadly only 400 baby sea turtles make it to the water.



growing up
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  • they find a place to stay for their first month
  • they will also get new and bigger predators
  • slowly they grow bigger
They find a nice place to stay for their first month of being a sea turtle.

They also get bigger and bigger to be a predator.

Slower and slower they grow into an adult sea turtle.
The baby sea turtles find a cosy place for their first month of living in this world.

They will also get bigger and stronger as a predator.

very slowly they will grow bigger and bigger until it’s time to explore.



Adult sea turtles
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  • Adult sea turtles get more protection
  • Adult sea turtles do get more of the larger  shark species and more danger
  • only 20 survive without human interference
  • 2 survive  
adult sea turtles preditors



4 comments:

  1. Hey Jasmine,
    Great writing. Your notes are really good.
    Just make sure your putting capital letters at the start of your sentence for the good copy.

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  2. It was fun working with you Jazzy!! :)

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  3. Great job Jasmine I really like hoe yo discribe those little things that make it better

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